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BuckeyesTHEGAME
08-22-2006, 09:01 AM
As some of you may or may not know, I am now writing for RealFootball365.com & have been assigned to the 49ers. I've been offered a few college teams if I so choose, but I don't think I want to cover anyone, as it would be difficult to find games opposite OSU, and I won't miss an OSU game.

Normally I wouldn't post this in the NCAA Football forum, as it has absolutely nothing to do with the game or college football in general, but the people who post in this forum are the people I know (COG, Bomber, TrojanNole, M_DUB, DJWIll, Bronco, etc) on here.

Anyway, my very first article was posted this morning. You can find the article here (http://www.realfootball365.com/nfl/articles/2006/08/49ers-house-cleaning220806.html) or you can just read the text wall below.

One thing, this article was originally going to have the first part about cleaning house segued into a story about how the new players performed in their preseason game Sunday night, but there was a communication SNAFU and another writer covered the game, so I had to scramble and write the thing about Smith yesterday morning...that's why this is basically two separate articles.

So yea, I hope you enjoy the article, and any constructive criticism would be helpful and appreciated.

Thanks,
BTG

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49ers' New Friends / Smith Should Start

When someone is greatly dissatisfied with their life, they clean house. They discard their old clothes and purchase new ones. They sever contact with friends and make a conscious effort to find new (hopefully better) friends.

"Out with the old, in with the new?"

Absolutely. Whatever it takes to get back into the right frame of mind for success must be considered...this much is obvious. However, one must not jump haphazardly into the fray at full speed. The potential for disaster is very real, and the probability of finding friends worse than the old increases exponentially as months turn to years, and years to decades. It's happened before. Just ask the Cincinnati Bengals . 14 consecutive years of bad friends? Egad! A coaching staff must take its time and carefully study and examine each detail of a potential change as one would do when contemplating the purchase of a diamond-encrusted Rolex from a New York street vendor. Thou shalt not be bamboozled by a phony!

With that in mind, Mike Nolan and his cradle of coaches have carefully selected individuals they feel will mesh with their overall philosophy. After all, the San Francisco 49ers are starting over. They have already rid themselves of many of their old friends. How many? Let's just say that if you were a starter for the 49ers last season, odds are excellent you're not wearing a gold helmet with the SF logo this year. Gone are longtime 49ers Fred Beasley (FB), Julian Peterson (LB), Andre Carter (DE/LB) and Ahmed Plummer (CB). Two young receivers (Rashaun Woods and Brandon Lloyd) were also victims of the house cleaning along with cornerback Mike Rumph. Former starting running back Kevan Barlow is gone as well.

Some of the new faces around camp are veterans Trent Dilfer (QB), Larry Allen (G), Antonio Bryant (WR), Taylor Jacobs (WR), Sammy Davis (CB) and Walt Harris (CB). Also entering the fold are highly touted draft picks Vernon Davis (TE) and Manny Lawson (LB) and a bevy of other talented players chosen last April, including one of the most intriguing prospects in the draft, RB/WR/QB Michael Robinson of Penn State. Out with the old, in with the new. Have the 49ers truly upgraded or simply restocked the shelves with more substandard players? That will be found out eventually.

Moving on, I know there is pressure in the NFL for a team to win immediately. I also realize that Dilfer is a capable quarterback and most likely gives the 49ers more of a chance to win now. The thing is, Dilfer is 34 years old and will only be around for another season or two, and to be honest, the 'Niners are not a year or two away from the Super Bowl. They're not even a year or two away from the playoffs according to many "experts" around the league.

With that in mind, it's time for Mike Nolan to put down the hook and allow Alex Smith to play every snap of every game this season to see if he can live up to his "first overall draft pick" status. It's important to see if Smith can get better from month to month in a full season as a starter. The key phrase here is, "and get better from month to month." Smith's progression is what people should focus on, not his overall numbers.

"But wait, aren't statistics the best way to judge the effectiveness of a quarterback?"

In a way, yes. But with young quarterbacks, the most important statistic is something most people ignore: PROGRESSION.

Take Carson Palmer, for instance. He did not start a single game in 2003, his rookie season. Instead, Bengals head coach Marvin Lewis chose to go with veteran quarterback Jon Kitna (who wound up winning the NFL's Comeback Player of the Year Award) so Palmer could learn the system before taking over. In 2004 Palmer was named starting quarterback during the preseason. He was Cincinnati's No. 1 pick and the franchise quarterback, and Lewis knew it was his time to play.

Palmer responded by throwing 18 touchdowns and 18 interceptions as the Bengals finished 8-8 for a second consecutive season. When you look at his overall statistics for that season, it's easy to take notice of his unimpressive 18/18 touchdown to interception ratio and say he had a poor season; however, when you look closer, his progression throughout the season is remarkable. Let's take a look.

September: two touchdowns / five interceptions.

October: three touchdowns / five interceptions.

November: eight touchdowns / six interceptions.

December: five touchdowns / two interceptions.

As you can see, Palmer continued to get better as the season went on, and anyone who watches football knows what he did in 2005 (32 TD/12 INT). Had Palmer been shuffled in and out of the lineup after a few bad games (the way Alex Smith was last season), it's quite possible he would have continued to struggle and been marked down as another Akili Smith or David Klingler by the Cincinnati fans and media. Marvin Lewis, however, did not let that happen. He showed patience and trust, and Palmer rewarded him for it.

(Something else worth mentioning is that Palmer's offense in 2004 was basically the exact same offense last season. Lining up around him was a Pro Bowl receiver, a 1,400-yard rusher, one of the best fullbacks in the league and a top-ranked offensive line...and he still didn't come flying out of the gate. The 49ers, on the other hand, have a rebuilt o-line, an unproven second-year running back and a brand new receiving corps. A premier offense they are not.)

Here's the thing, Smith needs to know his coaches have absolute faith in him. He must to be able to throw a few horrendous passes during the season and not have to anxiously glance at the sidelines to see if Dilfer is warming up. After all, the worst thing a quarterback can lose is his confidence.

At the same time, the San Francisco media and fans need to be patient and understand that he is going to struggle. Smith is not going to step into the game and morph into Joe Montana or Steve Young...or even Jeff Garcia. Those days are over. Gone.

Alex Smith, regardless of draft position, should not be asked to put an entire franchise on his back and lead it to 10 wins because, to be completely honest, the 49ers are not a 10-win team. They could be down the road, however, if Smith is given the time and patience he needs.

M-Dub?
08-22-2006, 10:48 AM
Good stuff. I know what you mean about not wanting your work to conflict with OSU games. I'm the same way. I try to keep fall Saturdays completely free, if I can help it. My one concern about being a sportswriter is that I might be too much of a fan. lol

tdc01
08-22-2006, 10:52 AM
Nice work BuckeyesTHEGAME. Keep it up and I will be reading.

VTHokie32
08-22-2006, 11:06 AM
Very good article. How did you get hooked up with those guys? Are you getting paid, or are you a volunteer?

TrojanNole
08-22-2006, 11:07 AM
Buckeyes, that was a awesome article. Impressed on the depth of content. How often do you update?

BuckeyesTHEGAME
08-22-2006, 12:44 PM
I'm getting paid for it. It's a small fee, but it's better than nothing. I can actually say that I get paid to cover the 49ers...that's nice to say. I got it simply because I applied. I submitted an article from my (now defunct) Ohio State website about last year's Iowa game along with a few links to articles I've written for Madden Mania (I have one on the front page of their site right now**cough cough**) and they hired me on.

I'm hopefully going to be writing two articles a week...one after the games on Sunday that will be published Monday morning and another one on Tuesdays that's an opinion piece/preview for the next game (or vice-versa if the game is a Monday nighter).

Thanks for the compliments, guys. I'm really happy with the article considering I had to re-write the whole last part the day I turned it in.

djwill13
08-22-2006, 02:22 PM
I'm getting paid for it. It's a small fee, but it's better than nothing. I can actually say that I get paid to cover the 49ers...that's nice to say. I got it simply because I applied. I submitted an article from my (now defunct) Ohio State website about last year's Iowa game along with a few links to articles I've written for Madden Mania (I have one on the front page of their site right now**cough cough**) and they hired me on.

I'm hopefully going to be writing two articles a week...one after the games on Sunday that will be published Monday morning and another one on Tuesdays that's an opinion piece/preview for the next game (or vice-versa if the game is a Monday nighter).

Thanks for the compliments, guys. I'm really happy with the article considering I had to re-write the whole last part the day I turned it in.
That's good stuff BTG. I know what you mean though about getting paid to write. I feel the same way saying that I technically get paid to play videogames. Great piece though man.

BuckeyesTHEGAME
08-22-2006, 02:44 PM
You get paid to play video games!? Do tell.

djwill13
08-22-2006, 02:49 PM
You get paid to play video games!? Do tell.
I'm on the staff here at VG and help out with odds and ends. Also do writeups for the filmroom, so yeah I get paid to play games lol :D

nothasoul
08-22-2006, 02:57 PM
All i can say is thank you:D . That put tears in my eyes reading it. It was fantastic.Great job

BuckeyesTHEGAME
08-22-2006, 03:33 PM
Nothasoul, if you visit any Niners forums, perhaps you could whore it out for me? As of right now I'll be having a submission on Monday and Wednesday. All 49ers all the time.

nothasoul
08-22-2006, 05:23 PM
Nothasoul, if you visit any Niners forums, perhaps you could whore it out for me? As of right now I'll be having a submission on Monday and Wednesday. All 49ers all the time.

I got ya back man, will do

VTHokie32
08-23-2006, 10:47 AM
DJ and BTG, do you guys make your livings with these past times? That would be pretty sweet.

BuckeyesTHEGAME
08-23-2006, 12:32 PM
Sadly no. I work in the Operations Department of a brokerage firm 40 hours or so a week. I deal with complaince and whatnot...making sure trades are being done properly, etc.

I don't have a college degree (though I'm working on it - I was in the navy for several years and am going for free) and none of the papers around here want to hire someone full time without a degree...even though (in my opinion, at least) I can out-write 80% of the sports journalists around here.

TrojanNole
08-23-2006, 01:27 PM
DJ and BTG, do you guys make your livings with these past times? That would be pretty sweet.

DJ does, the R4TH League pays him 50K a year to keep the league running year round 365 days a year!:D

Farmer
08-24-2006, 05:01 AM
Being a die hard Niners fan.......................... That was straight up beautiful man................... keep up the good work BTG!!!


Your article was informative, opinionated, and most of all remained objective. Damn good writing!!


-Farmer

djwill13
08-24-2006, 06:22 AM
DJ and BTG, do you guys make your livings with these past times? That would be pretty sweet.
Nah, if I were covering Madden, I probably could, but I just don't have the desire to do that. I'm content where I am to be honest with you.

VTHokie32
08-24-2006, 08:39 AM
You mean it's possible to make a living writing about a video game? That's unbelieveable. Only in America! What kind of money do these guys make? I live in Indiana, so if they're in New York or LA, it would probably seem like a ton to me, but cost of living in those areas is huge.

TrojanNole
08-24-2006, 04:42 PM
Nah, if I were covering Madden, I probably could, but I just don't have the desire to do that. I'm content where I am to be honest with you.

So, DJ, what you saying, the SPA/R4TH dont pay you enough and you want more benefits. OK, I guess you can request we up your 401K and supply with some extra sick days to your lifetime contract. Heck, DJ, I did get you a new car, that Mustang I sent you.:D

djwill13
08-25-2006, 04:50 PM
So, DJ, what you saying, the SPA/R4TH dont pay you enough and you want more benefits. OK, I guess you can request we up your 401K and supply with some extra sick days to your lifetime contract. Heck, DJ, I did get you a new car, that Mustang I sent you.:D
Yeah, that car was pretty sweet. My son loves it btw, so thanks man if I haven't already said so.

TrojanNole
08-25-2006, 05:57 PM
Yeah, that car was pretty sweet. My son loves it btw, so thanks man if I haven't already said so.

Naw man, you told me thanks already, I was wondering how the SPA company car drove around town. ;)

BuckeyesTHEGAME
08-28-2006, 08:41 AM
I figure I might as well put the second one in here so as not to clutter the forums. Again, any comments are appreciated.

Second article: http://www.realfootball365.com/nfl/articles/2006/08/49ers-cowboys-recap280806.html

49ers turn in poor performance against the Cowboys

Run away as fast as you can and do not look back. Take up stamp collecting. Learn to play an instrument. Lock yourself in a fall out shelter. Do whatever it takes to avoid watching their games, because odds are good you will not survive the season without suffering a complete mental breakdown. The San Francisco 49ers are doomed.

Wait, wait. Come back. This is, after all, only the preseason, and the Dallas Cowboys are one of the teams on the upswing in the NFL while the Niners are still trying to figure themselves out.

"We are not looking for victories, only improvement in the team."

Right. At least that's what the coaches always tell you. Then again, the desired result of watching a game is not nausea and frustration. You should not turn off the television, stare blankly at the screen, and shake your head in disbelief. Yet that is exactly what happened Sunday at six in the morning when I switched off the NFL Network's broadcast of the Dallas/San Francisco preseason game.

Six am. You read that correctly. I sat up until 6 am to watch the Cowboys whip the scarlet-clad team like a high school varsity squad punishing the JV players for insolence. The final count of the massacre? 17-7, yet the score hardly indicates the severe flogging that took place in Texas.

The 49er starters netted a mere 78 yards of total offense against the Cowboys' first-team defense (197 for the entire game), and scored their lone touchdown in the third quarter against the Dallas backups. Meanwhile, the Niners' defense played as poorly as they have all preseason, allowing the Cowboys to march up and down the field during the first half, like the "Triplets" circa 1993. The final numbers for the Cowboys' offense? 489 yards on 73 plays. Yikes.

"I wasn't as disappointed in the offense as I was in the defense," San Francisco head coach Mike Nolan stated after the game.

Well I should hope not, coach, considering your defense tackled as well as a 10-year-old playing Madden 2007 for the first time. (Switch and dive. Switch and dive.) I'm curious, does anyone on this team square up to make tackles? Anyone? Derek Smith? Jeff Ulbrich? Manny Lawson? There must have been seven or eight missed tackles in the first quarter alone. I've seen Pop Warner teams that were more fundamentally sound.

Then again, the defensive backfield did not play much better. Perhaps the 49ers can petition the league to allow Sammy Davis to legally use a cargo net on the field. Maybe then he can cover a receiver one on one. Then again, when a defensive line is as ineffective at rushing the passer as the one I saw yesterday morning, I suppose some leeway is allowed. After all, it's quite difficult to cover a receiver for nine seconds.

Of course, it doesn't help when the plays being sent in to the defense are as ludicrous as a few I saw last night. Most notably, having the unit line up with five defensive backs inside the five-yard line. Are you kidding me? Five defensive backs? Now I'm not a coach in the National Football League, but when I saw the Niners line up in that formation I said to myself, "Wow, Dallas should run up the middle." Sure enough, Drew Bledsoe turned and handed the ball to Marion Barber III who ran untouched into the end zone. It was just too easy.

Yes, the San Francisco defense has its problems. Then again, so does the offense. Specifically second-year starter Alex Smith. I am aware of what I said regarding Smith last week, and I stand by it. However, someone needs to take this kid into a film room, strap him into a chair and force him to watch game film of his interceptions until he finally sees what he's doing wrong. That, of course, would be locking on receivers as if he's looking at them through a telescope.

While watching him throw an interception after staring down a blanketed Antonio Bryant (and completely missing Vernon Davis for a sure TD), I seriously contemplated bashing myself about the head and neck with a large hammer until I passed out. That play was so painful to watch that I wanted to erase it entirely from my memory, and I was certain that a good coma would ensure that. But no, that sort of thing is unacceptable in modern society. Besides, there was quite a bit of game left to watch...it was only the second quarter.

It wasn't all bad, though. Smith did show some flashes of the talent that earned him the top overall selection in the 2005 draft. On the first play of the second quarter, a third-and-nine from inside his own territory, he stood firm in the pocket and delivered a strike to Arnaz Battle for a first down. The 22-year-old's 15-yard touchdown pass to Vernon Davis in the third quarter was very well thrown also, even if was against the Cowboys' second string. There is definitely potential there. Let's just hope he can play up to it.

The biggest bright spots for the Niners were Frank Gore and Davis. Gore continues to play well this preseason. He rushed for 54 yards on nine carries against the Cowboys and looked very confident with the ball in his hands. He has excellent field vision and definitely looks like someone who could develop into a star in the next few seasons. Coach Nolan seems to have found a gem in No. 21.

As for Davis, he only caught one pass, but the sixth overall pick certainly proved he's as fast as advertised. On the play where Smith threw the interception, Davis sprinted past Bradie James as if they were reenacting The Tortoise and the Hare. Very impressive to say the least. The Maryland product's touchdown catch was nice as well, even if he did look a bit confused/surprised after he caught the ball.

With only one exhibition game remaining, there are still many questions that need to be answered. Will the tackling improve? Will the secondary get better? Will the defensive line be able to impact games in any way? Will Alex Smith learn from his mistakes and stop locking on to one receiver? Let's hope the answer to all four questions is yes, otherwise another 4-12 season may be looming on the horizon.