People say Allen Iverson died today (I know he didnt die but here is what they say)

[madden07freak]

12/28/06

Today in Denver, the NBA superstar Allen Iverson known as AI got gunned down in a drive-by at 9:36 PM. People say they saw it but do not know who did it, they say it was 4 men in the car and they had a AK-47 and shot him in the chest maybe about 11 times, black escalade stopped on the side of him at a red stop-light. He is covered with blood all over his chest, face, legs...everywhere. He was found dead in the backseat, so he must haved tried to climb in the back but it was too late. His kids were in the backseat, but they were alright.

R.I.P. Allen Iverson
You will be missed
Loved and remembered

[dmac2brown46]

wtf???????????????

[Warbuck$]

If that's supposed to be a news blurb, someone made a terrible attempt to make it sound official.

[STICKTHEVICKTIM]

If that's supposed to be a news blurb, someone made a terrible attempt to make it sound official.


i think this might be dumbest thing I read on here. I just saw allen iverson sprint past the sonics D for a layup:D

[kevin21boston]

wtf thats so dumb

[blitzrique]

Will the original poster please come back and explain why he started this thread? Is there something here I'm just not coming w/in a million miles of getting?

http://www.m-w.com/dictionary/obscure

[BEAT0]

If that's supposed to be a news blurb, someone made a terrible attempt to make it sound official.
tru, the grammar and way it was written is a dead giveaway.

[kevin21boston]

Today in Denver, the NBA superstar Allen Iverson known as AI got gunned down in a drive-by at 9:36 PM.

Was gunned down?



People say they saw it but do not know who did it, they say it was 4 men in the car

you spell out numbers that are generally lower than 20. ex- four.



and they had a AK-47 and shot him in the chest maybe about 11 times, black escalade stopped on the side of him at a red stop-light.



run on sentence. should have just seperated the two thoughts into two different sentences.



He is covered with blood all over his chest, face, legs...everywhere.


he WAS covered? you cant have an ellipse in the middle of a sentence. plus it doesnt sound... professional.


He was found dead in the backseat, so he must haved tried to climb in the back but it was too late.


he must HAVE tried?

okay, wtf? he TRIED to climb in the backseat right? but it was too late as he died before he could get there? so how was he found dead in the backseat?



His kids were in the backseat, but they were alright.

kids and alright are both informal. children and safe should have been used. but most of all this sentence was not even needed.






okay that is my english lesson!

[Swift456]

i think this might be dumbest thing I read on here. I just saw allen iverson sprint past the sonics D for a layup:D



LMAO HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA Aa

[madden07freak]

found it on myspace. it was on a bulletin made by some jerk named Tomlinson#21.

[Nevada_Ballin]

why would you give creedence to anything on myspace??? lol

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[madden07freak]

didnt u read the thread name, They Say Allen Iverson Died Today (I know he didnt die but here is what they say