Track I made with a couple boys from back home

[ReDsOxFaN911]

We put on 4-5 songs on 4/20 so they're predominately about blazing up, this is one of them. I'm welcome to any criticism and I appreciate anybody that takes time to listen to a bunch of nobodies that could probably never make it rap for a few minutes.

My verse comes in at 1:59 (second verse)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rvB04lq4c-Y&fmt=8

[JoeJGibbs]

hahaaha to be honest, it doesn't sound all that bad. That's not my fav style or rap, but there is definitely some production value and skill there.

Edit: You know what.. after listening to it all, the 1st 2 verses go H.A.M., 3rd guy meh,
I was actually impressed by the 1st 2 verses.

I don't like the hook but at the end the slow monster voice with the dude saying "I break it down etc etc." in the background is good.
Overall, I think that track is legit. I could see people playing that in the car.
Hell, its way better than Drake.

[ReDsOxFaN911]

hahaaha to be honest, it doesn't sound all that bad. That's not my fav style or rap, but there is definitely some production value and skill there.

Edit: You know what.. after listening to it all, the 1st 2 verses go H.A.M., 3rd guy meh,
I was actually impressed by the 1st 2 verses.

I don't like the hook but at the end the slow monster voice with the dude saying "I break it down etc etc." in the background is good.
Overall, I think that track is legit. I could see people playing that in the car.
Hell, its way better than Drake.

Good looking man I appreciate that a lot. Yeah the hook was hit or miss, we thought the idea with the deep voice under the "I break it down..." was good but the execution wasn't as good as we hoped. I really do appreciate you taking a good six minutes to listen and give good, honest feedback. Thanks a lot bro.

[JoeJGibbs]

Good looking man I appreciate that a lot. Yeah the hook was hit or miss, we thought the idea with the deep voice under the "I break it down..." was good but the execution wasn't as good as we hoped. I really do appreciate you taking a good six minutes to listen and give good, honest feedback. Thanks a lot bro.

No prob.

Yea the deep voice alone, I didnt really dig. But with the "I break it down, I roll it up" playing over top of it that was good.

Goodluck.

[Indecline]

Your terrible, all of you.

You'll never make it in this business, im still trying to remove the blood from my ears from just 3 minutes of listening to your hideous voices, lyrics and rhyme schemes.

[levdgg]

First two verses pretty damn good. Beats the hell out of SOUR D's "music."

I would kick the third guy out of the group, though. You don't need a token black guy to make it in the biz.

[Michura]

I was expecting a lot worse. Good job.

[ReDsOxFaN911]

Your terrible, all of you.

You'll never make it in this business, im still trying to remove the blood from my ears from just 3 minutes of listening to your hideous voices, lyrics and rhyme schemes.

Haha, well I was expecting a post like this sooner or later. Thanks for listening anyway.

First two verses pretty damn good. Beats the hell out of SOUR D's "music."

I would kick the third guy out of the group, though. You don't need a token black guy to make it in the biz.

Thanks man I appreciate it. Yeah the third guy isn't in the group he was just a feature on the song, he didn't come with his best sh*t though. And I agree with that last part as well, it's no longer required.

I was expecting a lot worse. Good job.

Thanks for taking the time to listen.

[thegame11]

I'm really having a hard time getting around that token bs, that being said you were ok.